Oh, sweet. Loved the 'green carnation' line. The dialogue rings true; I think you got their voices exactly right.
I know it's not betaed. Still, if you'd like a comment on the spelling, I noticed that 'realise' is spelled once with an s, once with a z. Just a small thing, which does not in any way ruin this lovely fic:-)
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Date: 2007-12-28 02:16 pm (UTC)I know it's not betaed. Still, if you'd like a comment on the spelling, I noticed that 'realise' is spelled once with an s, once with a z. Just a small thing, which does not in any way ruin this lovely fic:-)